Focus Group - Draft 2

Due to having conducted this focus group, Yoli and I have decided to work on the following things among our next drafts:

• Introduce our music video with a title
• Colour correct - make brighter, more saturated so that the audience are interested and aesthetically engaged. Bright colours represent youth well
• Emphasise the difference between flashbacks and present day shots

Things that notably worked well in our second draft included the light leaks over "retro" shots and the rearranged shots at the end (there were no comments about Arthur being inappropriate this time).